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    dots Submission Name: twist the world asunder dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotstwist the world asunder dots
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    at last
    we pass through dry grass,
    the path carved
    between two trees
    embraced
    & filled with the fever
    of a moments lost corona.

    the blades
    prickle at our under-feet,
    at the insides
    of our sad eyes
    that caramelize in rows,
    stacked up
    like my over-darling always.
    there is a mirror
    that i've seen the stars through;
    childhood parading
    vibrates to the sound of heartbeats.

    i can still see you,
    lips like thunderfold,
    set on fire
    in a forest retreating,
    all ashes moving onward
    destined for some distant urn,
    some lovers arms
    that sold the moon
    to buy you smiling.

    we've cleared the gutters
    of the smallest vicious thorns.
    the rest
    hang from your rose filled beak
    like missing sentences.
    let the flowers fall
    where they may,
    but try to remember me
    as if it ever mattered
    at all,
    as if one kiss
    could twist the world asunder...




    Submitted on 2009-02-21 00:16:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow i love the power of this piece, i feel maybe you bombarded with a little too many images here and the connections between them werent enforced enough. I loved the ending, supreme writing here.
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow i love the power of this piece, i feel maybe you bombarded with a little too many images here and the connections between them werent enforced enough. I loved the ending, supreme writing here.
    | Posted on 2009-12-14 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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