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    dots Submission Name: My Feathersdots

    Author: Luvmiannie
    ASL Info:    30 something
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 20/7/14
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy Feathersdots

    Sometimes I think I have all the answers
    But really
    Iím just experiencing life
    Moment by moment
    Sometimes I think the world is coming down on me
    For reasons that are oblivious to see
    But its my lessons
    My chance to grow and make it better
    With all the lessons you learn
    You are afforded a few feathers
    To lay your head on
    When the timeís to hard to withstand
    You are not promised these feathers
    And when you receive one
    I am so grateful for YOU my blessing
    For you have shielded me from many ďA LessonsĒ
    That my little heart could not withstand
    With a smile you shine so brightly within
    Within my heart
    As it mends
    Each day it mendsÖ.my loving friend..

    Submitted on 2009-02-21 00:33:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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