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    dots Submission Name: After the Stormdots
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    Author: dear
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    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Nesting birds in fallen trees.


    Hopes, dreams and what is to be.


    Mending hearts and breaking ice;


    Collective souls, we dine tonight.


    Morning is the brighter of two,


    But stars can illuminate skies anew.


    Lullabying souls to rest,


    Restless spirits gain at best.


    Silver is golden too;


    What you are to me, I am to you.


    Nesting birds in fallen trees;


    True love can really never leave.




    Submitted on 2009-02-22 05:28:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lovely words from you and a very soothing read. Great description and a real joy to read.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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