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    dots Submission Name: After the Stormdots

    Author: dear
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 8/16/19
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    dotsAfter the Stormdots

    Nesting birds in fallen trees.

    Hopes, dreams and what is to be.

    Mending hearts and breaking ice;

    Collective souls, we dine tonight.

    Morning is the brighter of two,

    But stars can illuminate skies anew.

    Lullabying souls to rest,

    Restless spirits gain at best.

    Silver is golden too;

    What you are to me, I am to you.

    Nesting birds in fallen trees;

    True love can really never leave.

    Submitted on 2009-02-22 05:28:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lovely words from you and a very soothing read. Great description and a real joy to read.

    | Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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