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After the Storm

Author: dear
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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After the Storm

Nesting birds in fallen trees.

Hopes, dreams and what is to be.

Mending hearts and breaking ice;

Collective souls, we dine tonight.

Morning is the brighter of two,

But stars can illuminate skies anew.

Lullabying souls to rest,

Restless spirits gain at best.

Silver is golden too;

What you are to me, I am to you.

Nesting birds in fallen trees;

True love can really never leave.

Submitted on 2009-02-22 05:28:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Lovely words from you and a very soothing read. Great description and a real joy to read.

| Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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