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    dots Submission Name: Hero and Villaindots
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    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 69/55/29
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 86
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    Description:
       This poem is on the points f view of the hero and villain. The first line is the hero the second the villain.


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    I try to stand for the right,
    I seek the destruction and world's end,
    I want to try to give hope and bring light,
    I want my world-wide reign to begin,
    I seek the the salvation of all,
    I long for the destruction of any resistance,
    May justice an virtue our hearts call,
    May I always have my vengeance,
    I try to save people whenever I can,
    I wish to rule everyone,
    Perhaps I save because I want the reputation,
    Perhaps if I had forgiven, maybe my dark side would be gone,
    But I must do it for others not just to be the hero,
    It is too late they never should have done me wrong,
    I will protect the rights of others against villains and antiheroes,
    I will destroy everyone and then all will sing my song!
    I must use my abilities for good,
    I hate the doers of light,
    I must war against the world's dark hoods,
    All who rebel will be in for a fight,
    The world needs a light,
    All the world is cruel,
    Our world needs pursuers of right,
    All men are either rulers or tools.




    Submitted on 2009-02-22 21:47:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey thanx for the comment i put that on , on a viscious that i had talking to someone a few prior moments to writing it i finally read it to

    ya yor right i could of stepped it up a bit but for what is worth i will delete it anywaz

    i liked the way you put this piece together line for line they challenge the other
    well done and thanx

    sandman
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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