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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    away from what I learned to know
    away from who I miss the most
    its you
    i will remember you




    Submitted on 2009-02-23 04:12:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the short and simple directness of this. I am really starting to dig the minimalist vibe that has been going round. Other stuff is cool too, variety is after all the spice of life, but I really love this getting back to basics simplistic style that is emerging as of late. This piece is a shining example of the great potential this recent trend could have if it goes right.
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


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