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    dots Submission Name: i dunno what to call it except short & sweetdots
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    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 669
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsi dunno what to call it except short & sweetdots
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    you know how to burn the light right from my face

    you know how to change my taste

    but you don't know what it takes to change

    you know how to laugh while you watch me cry

    you know how to drop me off without walking me inside

    but you don't know life without lies

    and you don't know what it takes to try




    Submitted on 2009-02-23 19:43:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey and hi this was pretty good chances are to whom its to should get the point

    well done

    sandman
    | Posted on 2009-02-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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