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    dots Submission Name: beyond the point of no return?dots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Rant/Sorry
    Total Views: 463
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1005



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    dotsbeyond the point of no return?dots
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    i'm not going to crumble,
    i won't break this time.
    i can hold myself,
    and if i fall, it won't be too far.
    i won't do that to myself again,
    i can hold my composure,
    i'm not tearing myself up,
    i'm sewing myself back together.
    i know you were scared,
    watching me slowly die,
    changing just a little more everyday,
    and i'm sorry.
    but don't worry anymore,
    i'm not going to let it happen again,
    once down that road is enough.
    these walls have been torn down,
    i know, i've seen it, i've felt it through every vein in my body,
    but i'm getting better,
    you've said it yourself,
    i'm happy, but stop worrying that i'm just going to break again, because i've got enough bandages to keep me going for a while, trust me this won't start all over again.

    i'm not helpless this time.




    Submitted on 2009-02-23 23:14:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that's really good it has a lot of feeling to it i think you'll be famous one day!
    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      "...once down that road is enough."

    I like this line especially. Kudos to you. People can help us along in our times of utter depression but we are ultimately responsible for our own salvation (no religious connotation). Be strong for yourself before you can hope to be strong for anyone else. ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 00:00:00 | by Jelly | [ Reply to This ]


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