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There's alot of things of late
that I'm coming to regret.
the obligations I once had
as of this day have all been met.
Walk away and live your life.
let me do the same with mine.
Let me be let me love.
Let me loose from this bind.
I regret I had to loose
you to finally find myself.
I'm sorry for the damage
that both your and my hands dealt.
I'm sorry that it wents this far
that we let it wait this long.
I always thought that it would hurt
if one day you were to be gone.
I regret the time I gave you
i regret I ever care.
I regret I made you sorry
I'm sorry if I made you scared.
I regret the scars you gave me
the hidden and the plain to wear.
that for all the years I loved you
you were never really there.
I wish that you had not been lying
and were truly you back then.
Instead you have become a monster
killing all I held within.
I regret I rushed to help you
and the nights I dried your tears.
that I stayed always faithful
and fighting for you all these years.
Take it now take it all
any thing you wish just go.
I regret that I have hated
I woman that I once loved so.
Submitted on 2009-02-24 14:26:24
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