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    dots Submission Name: face in darkness dots

    Author: sushi
    ASL Info:    20/Female/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/2/1
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    dotsface in darkness dots

    In the night I here a sound under my bed
    a creature dancing in my head
    staring in my face
    looking down my throat
    My heart starts to pound
    I see a face in the mirror
    cant make out who or what it is
    It stares at me as if it knew me
    but all I saw was its half shaded face
    Nothing more not a body or a hand
    but a face

    Submitted on 2009-02-24 18:35:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oooh. Spooky. I like this one. It sounds almost playful. Like a campfire story. I can hear the crappy guitar strums in the background and everything.

    half shaded...half-shaded. I think.

    At the last line (but a face), I can so see someone leaping up and yelling boo, causing everyone else to scream. Of course, the screams would subside into silly giggles, and the fire would die away as everyone returned to their cabins, thoughts of faces haunting the undersides of their beds, traveling into their dreams.

    Very nice. I really like it. :) Really.

    --Sweets <3
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds good like scarey storie
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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