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    dots Submission Name: Unsung Childrendots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 402
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsUnsung Childrendots

    Unsung Children

    Somewhere deep inside you
    Behind the patches and the plasters
    Of your broken heart
    Somewhere in the shadows
    Lays the summer of your soul
    As timid as a naked flower
    Before revealing the splendour of her petals
    To the world

    Somewhere running under the rivers of your veins
    With the same fragile courage of porcelain
    Your tenderness is stronger
    Than any army’s rage

    And I wish I could take you
    Hand held out into the sun
    Show you how the cracks and scars
    Will be your deliverance
    Turn those solemn sorrows faded burdens
    Into the breaking clouds of blessed rain
    Washes away the ugly stain

    Till you see yourself again

    Somewhere in the soil and earth of being one
    The rooted light and love patiently wait upon
    Waiting for the moment
    When you burst out from behind the grey
    To stand your own salute to the overcome

    And I wish I could discover
    The realisation of who you are
    The exponential trigger
    Which would shoot you out to your freedom
    With the truth in the splendour of your sacred flower
    Leaving you amazed and unafraid
    In the libation of your own illumination

    To see

    All which you couldn’t believe
    And which disbelief has bidden
    All which you were forced to disbelieve
    And which believing has so hidden

    Behind the plasters and the patches
    Of your broken heart

    I know that I am unable
    To wipe away the anguish and your pain
    But if I could for just one moment
    Ask you look into this mirror
    For you to see yourself
    Once again

    You would see the salt in your tears
    Are the shinning diamonds
    Of your heart
    In the unsung forgiveness
    And the sacrifices
    You have made

    “ Wake up my precious loves
    “ Slowly steady the nightmare shall recede
    “ See
    “ With me
    “ My precious loves
    “ How wonderful
    “ You really are

    Dedicated to all my friends and my unknown companions
    Who as children suffered abuse in any form

    It is our lot, to be the un-understood
    The cold ignored and the lost forgotten
    And an embarrassment to moralities fickle truth

    We do, however, have each other

    “ X ” Col

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