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    dots Submission Name: Four Legged Madnessdots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 674
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    Bytes: 604



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    dotsFour Legged Madnessdots
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    Walking down town
    Blissfully
    Little fat puppy
    Small fluffy kitty
    Looking sweet and pretty
    Oh how I would love my own kitty

    Teeth grinding
    Hands finding
    4 Legged Madness
    I love their coloured coats
    Blissfully
    Dandering
    Some meandering
    Those the little fat ones
    Oh how I love when they run!

    Simple
    4 Legged Madness

    Blissfull
    Lives lived stressless

    How I could only imagine this

    Would love to be part of the Four Legged Madness




    Submitted on 2009-02-25 13:55:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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