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Hold Close My Resistence

Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
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Words: 66
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Hold Close My Resistence

This sense of loss
Deep inside, ripping,
And all i can do
Is carry on digging.
No matter what i do,
No matter where i go,
Still i cannot accept
What i have come to know.
I crawl on glass in
A bleak existence,
And though it all
I hold close my resistence.

Submitted on 2009-02-25 19:02:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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