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    Author: Jelly
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 16/14/10
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Remember that smiling face
    the one that greeted you with love everyday
    the one that asked for nothing in return
    except for a little affection

    such loyalty
    admirable actually
    true devotion
    that knew no bounds

    you would yell and they'd cower
    you'd rejoice and they were happy beside you
    only dying to show you
    the depth of their willingness to bring you happiness

    your pet
    your shoulder to cry on
    your confidant
    you're best friend

    why do they have to go
    too soon they are ripped from our grasp
    leaving us wondering
    did I make it worth while for them

    did they know they meant the world
    that without them life would never be the same
    that our love for them was unmistakable
    unconditional and eternal

    those soulful eyes looking up
    saying, "it will be alright"
    bringing hope into our hearts
    so lost without them here...





    Submitted on 2009-02-26 10:55:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have lost pets during my lifetime and it is a very sad occurrence... this is a good poem explaining how one feels.
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]


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