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    dots Submission Name: Apologies...dots
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    Author: Jelly
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 16/14/10
    Words: 118
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    dotsApologies...dots
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    my way of thinking hurts people
    I try to be as honest as I can
    but still spare feelings
    who am I to upset anyone?

    I can't open up that way
    doing so causes only pain
    not only for myself
    but also for the inquiring mind

    there is no need for me to lie
    accept what I say for what it is
    the only truth that you should know
    don't ask for more than I can give

    I may divulge a little extra from time to time
    but it always alters someone or something
    that's not what I'm here for
    take me the way I am or not at all





    Submitted on 2009-02-26 11:06:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the last line, "take me as i am or not at all".
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]


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