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    dots Submission Name: Not Realdots
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    Author: Jelly
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 16/14/10
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 591
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsNot Realdots
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    i am not real
    there is no me
    intangible and elusive
    barely there

    you think i am
    but that doesn't make it so
    i know i am not
    it's an unfortunate truth

    like a ghost
    slipping through reality
    imposing a tenuous image
    one of false hopes

    you see what you wish
    perceiving imagined qualities
    confirming me as the one
    blinded, ignoring actuality

    i continue to insist
    you are fooling yourself
    i am not what you see
    i never have been

    i am mere speculation
    the original enigma
    there's no salvation for me
    i am not real






    Submitted on 2009-02-26 11:12:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that's good keep it up
    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      "I think there for I am." You are only as real as you believe yourself to be. If you think no one will see you, they won't
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]


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