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    dots Submission Name: Scary Moviesdots

    Author: Jelly
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 16/14/10
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsScary Moviesdots

    sitting with the lights out
    maybe a single candle burns
    the anticipation of fear
    melts away the days' concerns

    knowing full well the consequences
    of pushing play on that remote
    sends shivers down the spine
    that we intentionally provoke

    tensing up our bodies
    attempting to prepare
    the adrenaline pumps through us
    don't look away, if you dare...

    there it goes, did you see it?
    were you brave enough to look?
    the soundtrack hyped it up
    leaves you trembling and shook

    nearly hyperventilating
    you swear your heart skipped a beat
    this most delicious feeling
    is a tantalizing treat

    if you're like me, it's never enough
    an addiction that begs to be fed
    never mind the horrific fantasies
    that will no doubt run through your head

    I cannot stop my search
    for the next level of fright
    you know you want to share it with me
    there's no need to put up a fight

    just sit back down and watch
    enjoy the primal fear
    let us cross our fingers
    and hope a ghost wont appear! *^_^*

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      im a horror picture fan i love scary movies. its an obsession i have to get my daily dosage of horror. this poem is neat I can relate to it. you told the feel perfectly.

    | Posted on 2009-03-05 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cool... I am definitely a fan of scary movies!
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]
      Not a big fan of newer scary movies. One of my friends put it best, "All they are is boobs and gore."
    | Posted on 2009-02-26 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]

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