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    dots Submission Name: Uraseidots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 312
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 575
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2386



    Description:
       I suppose this would be metal, or something.... most of it is actually said or screamed rather than sung, save the chorus. Caps indicates screaming and distortion.


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    dotsUraseidots
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    [Intro:]
    [two quick breaths, both in and out]

    (you, you)

    URASEI!
    F*CK!
    YOU!

    [Chorus:]

    Siren's call, watch 'em fall
    I still remember your lies, I STILL RECALL
    In your little world you like to pretend you've forgotten
    The knife-edged barbs, maggot-begotten!

    Choking on my anger, pushing away the pain
    Drowning in your lies, I'm strangling on your shame!
    Your deception, my cause of death's asphyxiation
    From my soul's position while you ponder my "suicidal inclinations"

    Siren's call, watch 'em fall
    I still remember your lies, I STILL RECALL
    In your little world you like to pretend you've forgotten
    The knife-edged barbs, maggot-begotten!

    Homicide is no fool's game
    Better watch out because my blood will stain
    Your- all-important- precious- REPUTATION
    And it responds to my silvertongued CORRELATION!

    Siren's call, watch 'em fall
    I still remember your lies, I STILL RECALL
    In your little world you like to pretend you've forgotten
    The knife-edged barbs, maggot-begotten!

    I stand before you as Circe, you bloody swine
    Suffering this nameless "madness" you refuse to define
    It's coughing up the bones of those you cannot see
    I swear I'll lock you in the pit of Hell you meant for me!


    Siren's call, watch 'em fall
    I still remember your lies, I STILL RECALL
    In your little world you like to pretend you've forgotten
    The knife-edged barbs, maggot-begotten!

    [Bridge:]

    WANNA WATCH
    ME
    BLEED

    I WON'T WATCH
    YOU
    SCREAM (x3)

    Siren's call, watch 'em fall
    I still remember your lies, I STILL RECALL (still recall)
    In your little world you like to pretend you've forgotten
    The knife-edged barbs, maggot-begotten!

    If you want to WATCH ME BLEED
    All you need to DO IS SCREAM
    (x4, volume increasing each time)

    [whispered] In the name of the nameless (urasei)

    F*CK!
    YOU!




    Submitted on 2009-02-26 19:52:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Humm, it's better than the other one I read, I love how it's meaning can be twisted onto school life *giggles darkly* Maybe it's just me but you have put the eye's of a Emo or Gothic chick on a cheer leader who has no F'in clue what life's all about. Mind you, that's not all cheer leaders, but some. . . . . Language has yet another Kudos from me again! Hummmm, I think you would like my poem Mausoleum of hope . . .
    | Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! Yeah, creepy, made me shudder. Haha. But after that I had a sick smile painted on my face. o.O Should I worry?

    Excelent piece. ^-^
    | Posted on 2009-04-27 00:00:00 | by XxSkyelerxX | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah!! What side of who's bed did you wake up on?? lol That was kick ass though!! Have you heard of Otep? If not look her up or something she rocks, and this sounds like something she would sing (scream) lol
    | Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by PhantomRose | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Well I don’t really know who wrote this. Couldn’t be you anyways. I am just al little bit astonished reading the “F” word and other demeaning things. Well, we all have our off days. What does urasei mean? Luv jm.
    | Posted on 2009-02-27 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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