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    Author: joy7542
    Elite Ratio:    5.03 - 1034/952/203
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I am free,
    I am weightless,

    I am graceful ...

    I can't fall,
    I can't pull myself down,

    my heart is no longer heavy.

    my legs go on forever,
    my arms can reach further,

    my back bends...

    I go under.

    earth gives me me air and
    water gives me life.

    I am untouched,

    not judged by anything around me,
    I am beautiful here.

    I move and
    it's effortless.

    twisting, turning

    sinking further down...
    I wish I never had to breathe again.

    the light reflects around streams

    of water on water,
    illumination my skin...

    it seems so untarnished,

    unscathed
    by the world above.

    My eyes are burning

    yet they shine brighter...
    my hair reaching out around me

    the sun could barely reach me...

    the world outside can't see me,
    no one could help me, hurt me.

    emerging -

    breathing, like I had forgotten how
    then,

    it was gone.

    I walked away with the world on
    my shoulders ... grace,

    far away

    I closed my eyes and they were thankful.
    A distant memory, a feeling slowly fading..

    here I am,

    this is where my body remains...
    but my soul, my being, I am

    unpaved thoughts and boundless dreams

    ...this is where you will find me,
    follow me there.




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      there is a message in this passional poem , your expressions are marvelous , very dee to the soul , a release of energy pouring out to the viewer , mystic , there is a thirst in your wording , great poem , it would be an honor to read my writings
    | Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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