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    dots Submission Name: just let godots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137/97/39
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsjust let godots
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    Stolen glances
    And choked up words
    A swollen heart
    And teary eyesbut still notihng
    Can explain the way i feel

    You're so blind
    To the way I react
    When we touch
    I shutter
    When you speak
    I stutter
    But still nothing can change
    The fact that you're not with me
    To hold and to love

    You're everything that i've come to love
    But i don't understand
    Why we never did last
    we always said "forever and ever"
    but there's always something in the way
    To keep me from you
    but all the detours and obstacles
    make the challenge worth while

    For everything that we've been through
    I can't just forget
    I can't just pick up the pieces
    I can't just let go

    Because you are my everything
    you are my love
    and you know you're my love

    :/




    Submitted on 2009-02-26 23:37:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      We will always remember our first love.
    | Posted on 2015-07-26 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful!
    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]
      oh to be 16 again. sigh even when it's tragic those are the butterflies of youth. you still write beautifully my darling
    | Posted on 2009-02-27 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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