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just let go


Author: black rose13
ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137 /97 /39
Words: 145
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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just let go



Stolen glances
And choked up words
A swollen heart
And teary eyesbut still notihng
Can explain the way i feel

You're so blind
To the way I react
When we touch
I shutter
When you speak
I stutter
But still nothing can change
The fact that you're not with me
To hold and to love

You're everything that i've come to love
But i don't understand
Why we never did last
we always said "forever and ever"
but there's always something in the way
To keep me from you
but all the detours and obstacles
make the challenge worth while

For everything that we've been through
I can't just forget
I can't just pick up the pieces
I can't just let go

Because you are my everything
you are my love
and you know you're my love

:/




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  We will always remember our first love.
| Posted on 2015-07-26 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful!
| Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]
  oh to be 16 again. sigh even when it's tragic those are the butterflies of youth. you still write beautifully my darling
| Posted on 2009-02-27 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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