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    dots Submission Name: "Forcing You to Love Me"dots
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    Author: Drifting Star
    ASL Info:    19/F/Somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 22/101/73
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 651
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this poem on the spur of the moment, with no desire to actually post it. I was on a power-trip, so. *shrug*...Ah well.

    If you must know, I have good inspiration for this piece. Comes from the relationship I share with a friend of mine.

    -Sennie.


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    dots"Forcing You to Love Me"dots
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    Pretty, pretty, he's so pretty;
    pull him close, kiss him hard;
    watch him bleed for the privilege.

    End it, all of it.
    Turn the music up so loud it hurts.
    Listen until your ears ring
    and the world goes up in flames.

    Say goodbye...

    Close your eyes.
    How many times have you asked for it?
    I'm going to give it to you,
    even if you scream this time.

    You lost the right to say no.

    Black tipped in white,
    watch the days go by.
    Against your skin
    the edges fade.

    It's not really a poem, but a way of life.
    I've watched you drift and now--goodbye.




    Submitted on 2009-02-27 05:00:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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