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    dots Submission Name: "Sibling Secrets"dots
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    Author: Drifting Star
    ASL Info:    19/F/Somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 22/101/73
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Enough said, I guess.

    -Sennie.


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    dots"Sibling Secrets"dots
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    Don't touch me.

    It burns, your touch;
    like hellfire, like damnation.
    The proof of a thousand nights
    we should never talk about again.

    I believe in you, funny;
    ridiculous, when you consider it.
    There's only so many half-truths to live,
    once we've run out, what will you do then?




    Submitted on 2009-02-27 05:03:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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