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The days seem more dull now
And the nights feel much the same
I doubt I can feel some how
All I'm becoming is a name
And you didn't have to go, you chose to
You could still come back at any time
After all we have both had to go through
You've always been the one on my mind
And it makes me a little sick
Though I'm glad that your happy
It just sets off a small tick
I just need to hear you love me
But I'm not asking for you to tell me
Wouldn't put your smile in jeopardy
If he completes you so
I know I should let go
I remember how things went so fast
How we went from friends to lovers
But I'm not living in the past
I just still want you in my future
And I'm not angry
I try not to be
Can overcome me
And I know that one day I will call
And other times indeed
I'll invite you to come and leave it all
To start over with me
But not any time soon
And so all of my days will grow cold
And my world is of ruin
At least memories of you don't grow old
But it won't be over soon
Submitted on 2009-02-27 06:52:53
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