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Author: sweet_rayne
ASL Info:    25/f/canada
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this i wrote for my little brother that died three years ago this april. R.I.P little brother


I miss you
My brother who
Is gone from sight
Never again will
I see your smil
Or the cheeky look
Upon your face
I miss you

I miss the talks
We shared
And the secrets
That remain ours
Never again will I hear
Your voice as you’ve gone
Away forever from a sister that loved you
I miss you

I miss the sound
Of your laughter at
The jokes we shared
And the false security
That you would never leave
I would give anything to hear it again
I miss you

I miss you brother
And your gone from sight
I wish you didn’t leave me
That dark night
That you’d be here and
I could hold on tight
But brother you’ve gone away
And I ca never have you back
I love you little brother
And I still miss you

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  Very sad. But well written. Your expression is straight from the heart......always the source of the best poetry.

| Posted on 2010-05-07 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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