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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I will



    my gorgeous sexy auburn haired hot witchcraft of a woman

    you make me die in petals

    you send my ravishing of your body

    hard to a twitching ache

    you leave me naked and begging for my fill

    to eat every inch of you

    and you drive me soft

    with plaint compliant lips

    to wrap my arms around your fire

    and fall forgetful

    to the supple warmth of your breasts

    where I weep

    for in you

    my love is ever grateful

    sleeping with you

    where our hands hold and fingers clench

    never to release you

    you are my breath explicit

    angel of my southern cross

    you are the very need in me

    and my every want




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