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    dots Submission Name: Somedaydots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsSomedaydots
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    Someday,
    Everything well be
    The way I had
    Intended it to be

    Someday
    My daughter
    Will become
    Strong,
    Determined,
    And full of proper self esteem
    I can only hope
    In the end
    She will become better than me
    You see,
    I screwed up everything

    Someday
    I will be content
    To be on my own

    Someday
    I will be emotionally ready
    To conquer it all,
    Hopefully one day soon,
    Because everyone knows,
    If I don’t I could end up loosing it all

    Someday,
    I will become optimistic,
    I think grass is a flower,
    Instead of a weed,
    Maybe one day,
    I will see the beauty in everything

    Someday,
    There won’t be a someday,
    It just will be that day.




    Submitted on 2009-02-27 22:16:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hope sustains life. The someday you are waiting to advent is actually in your own reach. Our mind governs our life. You have to conquer your mind first and that someday will be that day. Nicely written verse. Good theme. I enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2009-02-28 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]



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