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    dots Submission Name: The Noosedots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
    Total Views: 624
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1117



    Description:
       This dialogue holds true to the oppossite gender, also.


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    dotsThe Noosedots
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    I'm not gonnah take her back moma !
    I'm not gonnah take her back !!
    She left for another
    who told her a big, big lie.
    He said for her love he would die,
    but moma, why live with someone
    who's soon gonnah die.

    But moma he is married, moma,
    so I'm not gonnah take her back.
    She's second-hand woman now, moma.
    I don't know what disease he has
    womanising them enmeshed as cows enmasse.

    I don't care what you say,moma,
    your emotions bubble your eyes.
    I see with a justified love,
    she sees with an ashened heart
    caught up in a tangled love
    strangling her in a noose of lies.

    I know, moma,
    vows and oaths are a moral thing,
    but her cracked vase holds not her love.
    I can't trust her as once I did
    and love leaves me with a broken heart.

    Moma, don't you care about your son
    alone in a forest of cut down trees ?






    Submitted on 2009-02-28 04:26:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well this is a real teaser to test the moral intellect of a mere moral like me. Will try anyhow. We still share in zeros I see. Blessed be! jm.
    | Posted on 2009-02-28 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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