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life


Author: blackdemigod13
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life



Life i see it it's there
boring no gives a care
pain despair cries at me
no one cares about me




Submitted on 2009-03-01 20:25:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Um...
That's very sad.
You shouldn't feel that way!!
I care about you always...
Angel.
| Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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