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Death


Author: blackdemigod13
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Words: 19
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Death



roses are red
life is new
the world lays in solom blue
noones there how about you?




Submitted on 2009-03-01 20:27:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this poem is chill. you write short stuff but its impact is good because i am feeling sad after i read this.
| Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting poem...
I think that you could've added a little more to it, but you did a great job.
Keep it up, I would like to see how you progress as a new writer.
Angel
| Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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