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love wastes

Author: blackdemigod13
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love wastes

the name the eyes what a waste
he won't even talk to me am i a waste?
i can't be with him it's so sad
he must hate me really bad.

Submitted on 2009-03-01 21:13:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  talk about going around and around.. what a waste to waste a feeling on such and ingrate.. this poem is awsome!
| Posted on 2009-03-03 00:00:00 | by Luvmiannie | [ Reply to This ]

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