Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

There is so much loving


Author: caspian
ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark
Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 134 /189 /57
Words: 84
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
Total Views: 650
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 527



Description:




There is so much loving



there is so much loving
to sing about
and there is so much loving
i cant figure out

there is so much loving
to talk about
and there is so much loving
worth working out

but I
I need you for myself

there is so much loving
that comes around
and there is so much loving
without a sound

there is so much loving
up in the clouds
and there is so much loving
without a crown




Submitted on 2009-03-01 21:26:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  Very nice made me want to try to sing. The last line, "and there is so much loving
without a crown". caused me to think of what you meant? Still pondering which is good.


| Posted on 2009-03-07 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]
  this is interesting defently orginal i like it :) :P
| Posted on 2009-03-02 00:00:00 | by cha | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



171652