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    dots Submission Name: i wonder?dots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56/60/41
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsi wonder?dots
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    the world the colors
    they flash before my eyes
    i sit i ponder
    i wonder for awhile
    it comes it goes
    life goes by




    Submitted on 2009-03-01 21:48:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If all you do is watch the world go by, you never get anything accomplished. You need to do something about it! Nice poem.
    Angel
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    | Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]
      If all you do is sit and watch as life passes you by, you will be left behind. Chase after it, catch it, and surpase what is expected.
    | Posted on 2009-03-02 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]
      nice poem. im feelin it. life goes by. i like it.i like it.

    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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