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the world

Author: blackdemigod13
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Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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the world

the world is in our hands
together we stand
you fall and so do i
we are together our lifes intwined
i meet my death so will you
that is the way we live me and you

Submitted on 2009-03-02 01:51:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like how this rhymes and its very simple its gud.
| Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  thanks you got it
| Posted on 2009-03-02 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
  All in all, I agree, balance is the key to life. To live is to let others live. To die is to let others die.
| Posted on 2009-03-02 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]

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