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you


Author: blackdemigod13
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you


to think of you
it makes me blue
i miss you
the things we use to do
run play
all day




Submitted on 2009-03-02 20:26:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this poem reminds me and makes me miss my childhood friends.
| Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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