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    dots Submission Name: Love is...dots
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    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 69/55/29
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove is...dots
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    A commitment,
    A choice,
    That for which lives are spent,
    More than just lust after her poise,
    And her beauty,
    More than lusting over his appearance,
    Or personality,
    A decision to always give the ones you love a second chance,
    To be their strength,
    Their right hand,
    Spending time with them before it's too late,
    The hidden strength of all,
    That which is given,
    To himself, his family, or that which will lead to his fall,
    Is given to that which rules him,
    Worth so much more, who's price is higher,
    Than simple affection,
    But it is a commitment through the fire,
    A loyalty through the sin,
    May God give us this love,
    Because until we love one another,
    With this love from above,
    We as humans will cease to be brothers.




    Submitted on 2009-03-03 00:40:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a deep poem. It really means a lot to me, all the definitions of love really sink in with me. The way that it's written is very creative- it's just not about the love between to people but that between the whole world. That's what makes it that much deeper, especially to me.
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by ImperfectGirl1 | [ Reply to This ]



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