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    dots Submission Name: Shocked( I thought you were in love)dots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 78
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    dotsShocked( I thought you were in love)dots
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    How could I think,
    How could I fall so idiodicly,
    How could I be so naïve,
    I thought you truly were in love with me,
    I thought I really did mean everything,
    You honestly believed you were being patient with me,
    Instead all it ever was make believe
    How could you lie tome,
    You said you wanted to call me baby

    You and me
    Seemed to fit so seamlessly
    Everyday you and me,
    I pictured us to fit perfectly,
    I let you play,
    I thought all the others were just a game
    Turns out I was the one being played

    I can’t believe
    Iam so naïve
    I really believed this would be more than a dream
    Friends really,
    Friends don’t break friends
    So effortlessly




    Submitted on 2009-03-03 04:17:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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