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    dots Submission Name: Presentdots
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    Author: DarcKami
    ASL Info:    18/F/Rolla, Mo.
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPresentdots
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    Slices of myself
    find expression
    in the rumble
    of everyday noise

    At times,
    To breathe
    another breath
    takes effort
    of unknown proportions

    Silence
    to gather myself
    is a commodity
    that simple
    does not exist
    in any realm

    Realisation
    that movesments
    of this universe
    are expressed
    in the tiniest
    pertiale of a cell
    deep within my body
    meandering on its path

    Always Here

    Always Now




    Submitted on 2009-03-03 17:49:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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