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    dots Submission Name: Sea of dreamsdots
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    Author: Luvmiannie
    ASL Info:    30 something
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 20/7/14
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSea of dreamsdots
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    In the middle of a sea of dreams
    Itís funny how you want to be
    In the arms of another that doesnít see
    What love would truly mean
    If we two could just be
    What love would unknowingly bring
    If we two could just see
    That itís not just a dream
    Itís a way that true feelings roam openly
    A portal to everlasting happiness with me
    If it could just be
    More than just a dream




    Submitted on 2009-03-03 17:56:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good poem, ty
    | Posted on 2009-03-19 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      i hope you two get to be together i know how it feels to not be with the one you love
    | Posted on 2009-03-03 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]


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