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Author: blackdemigod13
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when i think of boring the word school comes to mind
it's all a bunch of bull
a waste of time.
nothing to do but sit and die
wasting away till the end of time

Submitted on 2009-03-03 20:10:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like school because thats the funnest thing I can do in my everyday life.Its better than being at home.
| Posted on 2009-04-07 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]
  School gives us time to daydream and something to vent at...not totally wasted I guess. Can't daydream while you're sleeping. :)

Nice write!
| Posted on 2009-03-07 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]
  i never liked school either. fun poem.
| Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  You're just full of joy, aren't you?
| Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]
  Unfortunaltly, school is a neccesary waste. Bare through it, you'll come out better in the end.
| Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]

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