Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Resurrections 2dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 288
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1124



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsResurrections 2dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Resurrections 2



    Timeless beyond light brought awareness
    Breathing by life blood
    Destinies womb where souls settle
    Diamond snowflakes from above

    Shifting susurrus of whispered tryst
    The sanctuary of love
    Configured identities in Dervish dances
    On Astral quivers Plato arrows of heavenly vistas

    When light bequeathed the resurrections echoes
    In double edged colours
    Regalia of solace and shadow
    Gathering perception attend communion

    Converse of ordeal and peace survive
    The assay of a soul alive
    Moulded so and pursues the resolution of flesh
    To these posed questions of only being

    Drawn up upon by the empire of luminosity
    Antique pulsation relinquishes its commission
    Reaching into glittering organs of the night
    Breathes out its loosening Karmic of love

    Life’s collected beauties join ascension
    The exulted wayward blessing spoken
    Returns a diamond snow flake
    To the above





    Submitted on 2009-03-03 23:31:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    171712

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    The World written by jjd
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Love written by saartha
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Carry written by saartha
    prison written by ShyOne
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry