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    dots Submission Name: Resurrections 2dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Resurrections 2



    Timeless beyond light brought awareness
    Breathing by life blood
    Destinies womb where souls settle
    Diamond snowflakes from above

    Shifting susurrus of whispered tryst
    The sanctuary of love
    Configured identities in Dervish dances
    On Astral quivers Plato arrows of heavenly vistas

    When light bequeathed the resurrections echoes
    In double edged colours
    Regalia of solace and shadow
    Gathering perception attend communion

    Converse of ordeal and peace survive
    The assay of a soul alive
    Moulded so and pursues the resolution of flesh
    To these posed questions of only being

    Drawn up upon by the empire of luminosity
    Antique pulsation relinquishes its commission
    Reaching into glittering organs of the night
    Breathes out its loosening Karmic of love

    Life’s collected beauties join ascension
    The exulted wayward blessing spoken
    Returns a diamond snow flake
    To the above





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