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    dots Submission Name: Prevelli Ravine ( Crete 1992 )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsPrevelli Ravine ( Crete 1992 )dots
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    Prevelli Ravine ( Crete 1992 )

    Ghost song
    The ancient priest left in the monastery stone
    Long before my encounter
    Within the walls repeat their long labour
    Monument and missionary linger
    Hushing a wind into olive groves

    Searching for the nameless Minoan
    Outside of human mystery recollections
    Beyond my makeshift mask of intelligence
    The birds awaken
    Tropic songsters jungled forests of palm

    Star dusted dark a canopy of sleep
    Reflections a fall of endless beauty
    Rainbow fish in deep water clarity
    Leap into freedom
    And the jungle voice a hymn of whispers

    Follow them
    Follow them

    The pools sink to deeper ravines
    Rivers of sand and turquoise water
    Fluent lighted domains of Knossos
    Alter the ponderings of palms and cliff
    In network ripples tracing starseed patterns
    On a Phalanx of fluted clouds

    Leaping to freedom

    From the clear water crystal laughter
    River to the sea
    The beach
    My tent
    And me

    Follow

    Follow

    Follow them





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