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    dots Submission Name: My Prayerdots
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    Author: all2rest
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    dotsMy Prayerdots
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    Lord of Lord
    King of Kings
    Host of Heaven
    My heart does sing

    Praise your name
    I'm not ashamed
    I'm yours to send
    I'm yours to change

    Bless my house my family and friends
    May they know I love them
    until the very end.

    Keep me honest, and pure at heart
    Forgive my sins that set us apart
    Give me this day, my daily bread
    I choose to be yours and spirit led

    Above all else, bless your name again and again.
    Bless your kingdom and people,
    I love you, amen.




    Submitted on 2009-03-04 23:48:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Honest and beautiful, completely heartfelt.

    Atleast, to me it feels like it is.

    There's a warmth about your work, I don't know how to explain it but while reading this I just started feeling...happy, I guess... and warm inside.

    Gosh that sounds so corny but I don't know how else to put it in words :)

    Yours, Iffy
    | Posted on 2009-03-05 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]


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