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    dots Submission Name: 3dots
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    Author: MyWorld
    ASL Info:    21/M/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76/99/87
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 978



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    You're unsure, well, I'm certain.
    My curse of words is my only burden
    To further my purpose,
    My situation I'll worsen.
    My sources of tribulation are merging.
    Converging and urging me to hurry with urgency
    But, my mind stays in that mindstate
    The longer that I wait
    The more time it takes
    Enthralled in stalling the falling of all things while I could just wait
    It's just more fuel to stoke the fire, provoke desire, invoke a higher
    Power, I'm towerin over these sour fools
    You cowards'll be ruled with an iron fist
    When this shit hits let's get rich quick
    There's no sick bit to get ya lit until this
    So, Imma stand down and let you sit up
    As, if you're quips could ever be quick enough
    You're found outta bounds so just give it up
    You got your shots but it's not like a free throw is ever enough.




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