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    dots Submission Name: Quietly Mourningdots
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    Author: QueenVictoria
    ASL Info:    15/F/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 778
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    dotsQuietly Mourningdots
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    Her soul is a bottle of silent tears that lay dormant
    Her eyes are globes that have never shed a tear as they looked about slowly
    Her mind is a stormy cloud that she wants to see through
    Her heart is a fading lone star as she mourns quietly




    Submitted on 2009-03-05 09:51:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the vivid picture you paint, However I must admit I don't really get this piece of work at all. I get that your trying to explain a mood, but why are you explaining this mood. It would have been also alot nicer if you wrote more, I think this is a great start though

    | Posted on 2009-03-05 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]

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