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    dots Submission Name: Watching the World With Earsdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 564
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1402



    Description:
       the blind perceive the world pervaded with beauty and still finds it repulsive. where as we only see ugliness, and still somehow find solace.


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    dotsWatching the World With Earsdots
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    He sits on this step everyday,
    But he can't see a thing,
    His world's not black, it's just a dream,
    A paradise, that no one else can see,
    People would rather be loved than hated,
    they'd rather be hated than unknown,
    Well he's known...
    But he's so alone.

    Maybe when the sun goes down tonight,
    He'll disappear like light,
    It all looks the same to him anyway,
    (So why should we bother with him?)
    When he dies will he walk toward the light?
    Cause every day's like night,
    He can't even find his way back home
    (So why should we bother with him?)

    He sits on this step everyday,
    Questioning reality,
    Perception is perfection when you're limited to sound,
    Ever wondered how English sounds to some?
    He may be blind, but he's not deaf or dumb
    If he's never known ugliness,
    Then he'll only see beauty in all of this

    Maybe when the sun goes down tonight,
    He'll disappear like light,
    It all looks the same to him anyway,
    (So why should we bother with him?)
    When he dies will he walk toward the light,
    Cause every day's like night,
    He can't even find his way back home
    (So why should we bother with him?)




    Submitted on 2009-03-05 20:37:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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