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    dots Submission Name: Start To Shine Brightdots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
    Total Views: 76
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    Bytes: 477



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    dotsStart To Shine Brightdots
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    I’m all alone
    I feel the wind
    It’s singing a tune
    I hope it’s the response
    To my long passing cries

    Inside I ache
    Each bone,
    Is about to break
    Each thought,
    Reinitiating pain
    That so badly I want to make go away.

    I only imagine
    My thoughts of this song
    Are soulfully true
    Because I want tonight
    To be that night
    That I start to shine bright




    Submitted on 2009-03-05 21:18:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poignancy is being reflected in each line of your poem. The last stanza is little ambiguous. As far as I have understood I think you mean after bearing so much pain in life, pain no longer afflicts a person and a person shines bright. I have also written a poem on pain. You must read.
    | Posted on 2009-03-08 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]



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