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    dots Submission Name: the 'f' dictionarydots
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    Author: Maverique
    ASL Info:    25/F/Own little world
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 438/478/128
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    ~ fall ~
    ever deeper, daily
    for you


    ~ fatalistic ~
    that which i cannot help
    (see above)


    ~ fade ~
    from your consciousness.
    invisible is something i do exceptionally well


    ~ futile ~
    these feelings
    that i wish i could wish away


    ~ fairytales ~
    don't come true. not always.
    wishing stars crash and burn, don't you know?


    ~ foolish ~
    me






    Submitted on 2009-03-06 15:18:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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