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    dots Submission Name: A Path I'd never takedots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsA Path I'd never takedots
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    I never thought the world so dim
    So bleak, so hopeless an abyss.
    I never remembered a world so horrible
    So dark, so meaningless without desist.

    I then saw a path, and explored its realm
    It was a path not many took.
    I saw it's horrors, the coward's way out
    And all it took was just one look.

    Now I live every day
    And with happiness in my life.
    I had rather live with some glee
    Than escape the day causing strife.




    Submitted on 2009-03-06 16:23:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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