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    dots Submission Name: Marching the Minddots
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    Author: 3L3m3ntal
    ASL Info:    18/M/Arizona
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 2/5/7
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    2.5000
    Bytes: 1559



    Description:
       I in all honesty forget why I wrote this particular song for my band... it was just some lyrics and a rhythm that popped into my head, and I liked it.


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    dotsMarching the Minddots
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    Drinking the poison of society,
    Politics corrupting the populace.
    Trivial matters breaking,
    The church begins to choke the souls
    Brainwashing the children of our cities

    Consenting the reality of society,
    Of a church that pulls the trigger,
    And a people drinking cyanide,
    Separating mind and soul,
    Procession of the fates.

    Drink, the poison. Pull, the trigger.

    Kill, the mind. Drag, the body,
    Into the abyss below

    Marching the soul to its doom,
    Screaming as it falls.
    A procession working fine,
    People committing suicide
    The brain is dying, and the body, decaying.

    Consenting the reality of society,
    Of a church that pulls the trigger,
    And a people drinking cyanide,
    Separating mind and soul,
    Procession of the fates.

    Drinking cyanide,
    Distributed by the leaders of society,
    The population wears a mask,
    And the government leads the body, mind, and soul,
    In one massive procession,
    Blaming God along the way.

    God has failed us,
    Pulled the trigger and fired,
    As we’re coddling unpatriotic saints,
    Who speak voices,
    But not their own.
    Speaking a false tongue and false truths,
    Behind an empty smile.

    Following the Gods of a broken society,
    Praying to a useless puppet,
    Merely a convoluted texture on a broken seam.




    Submitted on 2009-03-07 05:47:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lol, thanks. I never would've thought of Styx, but I suppose so.

    But... Slipknot, yes. There will be screamo thrown in, so, it's the main intent.
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by 3L3m3ntal | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm imagining this as sort of a cross between Slipknot and Styx. With a bit of screamo going on mixed in with a drawl-y twang. You know?


    The lyrics are kind of elegant. And dark. Very dark.


    Nice write. :)


    --Sweets

    <3
    | Posted on 2009-03-11 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      very well written lyrics wat kind of band r u?
    | Posted on 2009-03-08 00:00:00 | by Tmckenzie89 | [ Reply to This ]



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