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    dots Submission Name: Children of Mandots
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    Author: 3L3m3ntal
    ASL Info:    18/M/Arizona
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 2/5/7
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 98
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1426



    Description:
       Umm... This song I wrote in Topics of Algebra... because I was bored, and had the movie Children of Man stuck in my head, along with the song "The Wall" by Pink Floyd in my head, and so I put the two together and made "The Wall" Much darker and heavier


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    dotsChildren of Mandots
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    Child, child, why do you cry?
    Don’t cry, don’t scream, it’ll end soon.
    The seams are torn,
    The father’s dead, mask stained,
    The assembly works

    Rebellion lies beyond the horizon,
    Flames consume the city,
    Blood stains the masks,
    Everyone’s crying for a reason,
    Crying for the Children of Man.

    Self Sacrificing lies are all I hear,
    Everyone’s trying to run through closed doors,
    Blind to the truth slowly binding,
    Bound by masks of deceit,
    People march the assembly

    Rebellion lies beyond the horizon,
    Flames consume the city,
    Blood stains the masks,
    Everyone’s crying for a reason,
    Crying for the Children of Man.

    Truth enclosed by Darkness,
    The blind lead the blind,
    Education means nothing,
    A blind eye turned when the mother dies,
    The Samaritan becomes the martyr,
    For a world so cold.

    Rebellion lies beyond the horizon,
    Flames consume the city,
    Blood stains the masks,
    Everyone’s crying for a reason,
    Crying for the Children of Man.

    The mask bears deceit,
    Nobody dares to see the travesty,
    Everyone lives the grandeur lie,
    Wasting, wasting away,
    Turning their backs away from the ignorance,
    Crying for the Children of Man




    Submitted on 2009-03-07 05:49:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hm. Diggin' the title.



    Crying for the Child of Man. Catchy line. I like how you repeat it.


    The poem's sad. Really...depressing. However, I like it. You can tell it's a heartfelt poem, and I can certainly see you've got the makings of an excellent artist de words.


    Keep it up, and thanks for sharing your work. :)
    | Posted on 2009-05-18 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]



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