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    dots Submission Name: Worrydots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsWorrydots
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    A sleepless night, no dreams here,
    If only there were something to do,
    No sleeping hour e're draws near,
    Wondering what will come.

    Paranoia has set in because of a thing,
    It's odd, I think for this to appear,
    It's not of person place nor saying,
    But of what I am simply thinking.

    I think of the things that I've done strange,
    I start to worry when it happens,
    But there is nothing, no change,
    I need help from someone close.

    They try to help, but to no avail,
    I say "Thanks, I'll try again,"
    But it seems as though I will fail,
    Walking down and endless trail.

    Ah, here's sleep, come for me,
    I'll see you tomorrow, just friends, the three.




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